Etiquette



DP Etiquette

First rule: Don't be a jackass. Most people are good.

Other rules: Do not attack or insult people you disagree with. Engage with facts, logic and beliefs. Out of respect for others, please provide some sources for the facts and truths you rely on if you are asked for that. If emotion is getting out of hand, get it back in hand. To limit dehumanizing people, don't call people or whole groups of people disrespectful names, e.g., stupid, dumb or liar. Insulting people is counterproductive to rational discussion. Insult makes people angry and defensive. All points of view are welcome, right, center, left and elsewhere. Just disagree, but don't be belligerent or reject inconvenient facts, truths or defensible reasoning.

Friday, October 10, 2025

Very Short Story: The Clutch of Trees

Here's another short story-- this one VERY short. It's a sort of contemplative piece, less plot driven than evocative of the relation of human beings to nature around and within. In a time of dire newsflashes, and under-reported political threats, I hope this gives readers a moment to pause and consider the quiet, but profound serenity of nature-- even in the face of danger and loss. With that, I give you The Clutch of Trees.

In the Clutch of Trees

There is a clutch of trees on the edge of the city, where Riverside meets the hush of the river. All summer, their branches hum with birdlife: a living chorus, each song braided into the shimmering air. No other trees nearby are so alive with sound. On the hottest days, even the city's restlessness pauses here, just for a breath.

A boy named Theo—quiet, curious, and slow to speak—begins to linger on the old park bench beneath these trees. At first, he comes simply to escape the sun, but soon, he finds himself listening with a strange new attention. Morning and afternoon, birds arrive and depart. Their chattering, frantic at times, flows around him like wind.

As the hours accumulate, his ears learn more than language. At first, it's only rhythm and pattern: the tumbling rise and fall of trills, the sharp alarm, the gentle call. Then, as days lengthen, he senses something else—a current of meaning, woven beneath the surface. He listens, as children do when no one expects anything of them, until understanding begins to dawn, piecemeal and imperfect, but real.

In late summer, when heat bleaches the sky, Theo sits longer than usual, notebook in hand. The birds' gatherings grow noisier, but a new tone creeps in—edge, urgency, a flicker of unease. He closes his eyes and lets their voices wash through him. Sometimes he feels joy so clean it stings. Sometimes, dread.

By early autumn, the trees shift their scent, and the chorus changes. He hears not just a gathering, but a council. The chattering, once chaotic, is shaped by a gravity he senses as sadness and fear. Into the hubbub, three voices rise, distinct and urgent.

The first: old and heavy, her song dropping like stones into still water—slow, weighted with memory. She seems to mourn aloud, each phrase thick with loss.

The second: brisk, orderly, sharp-eyed—the call staccato and angular, mapping routes and warnings, a blueprint in sound.

The third: darting, anxious, never settling—voice rising in pitch, flickering branch to branch, naming dangers in the shadows.

Theo shivers. For the first time, he feels the frantic burden under their music. He cannot ignore what is being said.

Over days, he wanders the neighborhood on small, invisible errands. He finds the scattered feathers, the quiet remains. He notes the places named in the birds' councils—quiet alleys, overgrown yards. He tallies. He records. In the park one afternoon, he tapes a single note to a lamppost: Please keep cats inside at night. The birds are dying.

By evening, the note is gone—torn or ignored, he cannot say.

He carries his notebook to the Parks Department. The officials are skeptical at first. One woman barely glances up. But a park ranger, Mr. Ramos, listens and follows him through the affected blocks. That evening, patrols are arranged. Signs appear: Keep cats indoors.

Theo feels a seed of hope, brief and fragile.

But the city returns swiftly to indifference. The trees do not.

One cool October day, when the council above is nearly silent, three birds leave their branches and flutter down to the railing near Theo's bench. For a long moment, they regard him—heads cocked, bright eyes sharp with knowing.

He whispers softly, "I tried to help. I wanted you to be safe."

The birds—elderly, ragged, vital—listen. Something almost like gratitude threads through the world between them. The eldest lets fall a muted trill, not of warning or grief, but of acceptance. The strategist chirps once, crisp and final. The anxious bird fluffs and smooths its wings, as if making peace with uncertainty.

Theo smiles, blinking tears, and for the briefest moment, the distance between ground and sky seems very small.

Then, as autumn deepens, the gatherings thin. The birds ready themselves for journeys Theo cannot follow. One dawn, the branches are bare. Only a lone feather spirals to the bench where he once sat, a voiceless reminder.

He visits sometimes, but the trees are silent now. Still, he listens—catching the river's quiet, the whisper of unseen wings far overhead, the memory of a chorus he will never quite understand but will always hear, in some gentler place within himself.

And sometimes, he hears them there more clearly than he ever did in the branches.

Through joy and loss, presence and parting, he has learned—beauty, when listened to with a full heart, is inseparable from its passing

 

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